So I'm working on a new story at the moment but I have a finished one as well that I'd really like to get some feedback on. I don't know where to go from here with it so I'd love if one or more people could take the time to read it and give me their thoughts...should the point of view change, scenes taken out or added in, etc? I'd just love to know where to go from here so I don't feel like it's a complete waste of a story because I do like the overall idea and want to make it more complete.
I did win Harmony's PAYA auction for a 25 page manuscript critique which is great so I will be getting that, but who knows what that will say and it's still only the very beginning...I want the whole thing read over. So anyway, I'll love you for life if you want to help out and I can try and read your work too if you have something sitting around. I can't promise I can help much, but I need a critique group and you all are the only ones I know of that love the types of books that I love and write.
So anyway, get in touch. Leave a comment here and I can email you or you can email me here: lauren51990 AT aol DOT com