Monday, February 7, 2011
In Which I Give You My Book's First Line...
Dark and Stormy Blogfest Contest
To try and win an awesome critique by an agent, I'm entering this giveaway. In order to do so, I have to write a couple things about my manuscript and include only the first line. So here we go...
Name: Lauren Becker
Title: The Heartbreak Boys
Genre: YA Contemporary (LGBT)
Annabelle Williams gave birth to a beautiful baby boy named Ryan.
And because everyone seems to agree that I need more...I'm going to add the second line, and if you all have ideas on combining them or something, comment!
Beautiful words for a heartless bitch.
I wish we could include more than the first line, because the second is the real clincher that should make you go "Ohh...what's going on?!" but hopefully the first line is somewhat interesting! Enjoy...leave your thoughts if you wish!